Well Done, Marie. I;m pleased to see that you've attempted to respond to one presentation.The point you make about the presenter talking about real conflicts is good because you, as the audience, could hear the authenticity in his voice and therefore you connected with his message. This is what you will need to strive for in your own presentation. The audience must feel that you know what you are writing about.Some suggestions to give greater meaning/depth to your response/analysis of the above presentation and to show greater understanding could you:1. Quote a well written sentence from the presentation on peace to substantiate you point about his English;2. You suggested that the presentation could improve with more colours. Good! Can you include an explanation of the colours that would be appropriate and the meanings/messages that the audience could associate with these colours in the context of the main messages within the presentation.
I look forwrad to your analysis of the 2nd presentation. I will expect a depth of analysis along the guidelines above. I also look forward to your Inquiry essay.
Keep persevering, Marie. I'm proud of you.
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